Dream Deep

... says the man with 22,000 words in NaNo... :wink: But to be able to get so much written for November, Cass, and still get so much critted is amazing. ...

Dear Lord, Jack, you're making us all look bad. ^_~

There are no comments? A travesty! I'm surprised that no one's said anything, Yoha, this is quite good. I can see the beautiful day and I think you captured all ...

Incan's a celebrity. ^_^ Nice job, Cal, I really liked it. Definitely worth a try, it was great.

Good job, Cass! Ah, but you totally blew us all off the wall with the points and the crits - you were unstoppable. ^_^ Congratulations! :razz:

I think Tolkein does a lot for your poetry, Bjorn. ^_~ You have a very definite voice and style, which is quite involving. Sohini: pistols at dawn for number-one-fan-dom. :wink:

We've met already. ^_^ I, too, am addicted to fragments - there just too interesting to stop using. I mean, who wants to read everything in perfectly grammatical, easily diagrammable ...

A for instance, perhaps? I think this sort of thing is what MetalHead means... ^_~

*hugs MH and tries very hard to stop giggling* Ah, the subliminal exasperation of the CCF bouncer. ^_~ Welcome, Alanna. As MetalHead says, you probably want to go ahead and ...

At the moment, I think it counts as my favorite, though admittedly my favorite changes rather often. ^_~ I liked when Svidrigailov (sp?) killed himself. And when he had Dounia ...

Much better than you assumed, then, if you thought it ah... arterially miserable. ^_^ I look forward to the continuation.

I keep logging onto YWS whenever I'm near a computer... >.

Snoink's Question: I'm not, thank you very much, don't you think that's a bit perverted of a question to be asking someone you meet randomly in the street? - Shan ...

Heh, one time I ran out of ink in my black pens and I actually didn't write until we got to the dllar store and the local pen supply. ^_~ ...

The concept was very good, very sweet and well thought out. But the wording and the formatting in places was more than a little confusing and made you lose your ...